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There's definitely a huge sense of contrast in this but with bright colors against a dark background, I guess it's a given. However, I feel like there's something missing. For all it being a carnival, the void of a background makes it lack the excitement. There's lot of bright color... but there just isn't that... bang.
Also, the juxtaposition of themes and colors feels rather odd. I guess... Meta knight is a bit like a flamenco which is still elegant but subtle and that doesn't make a lot of sense. Rather than noticing the dance immediately, you see the stage instead. Maybe if you made him walk on something instead of in midair or anything that would make him more noticeable without changing that cool, mysterious impression he's giving off now.
The shading is also a little inconsistent. I understand Meta knight having it but the balloons feel odd having depth while the other brightly colored things aren't. But I do understand why it would be a hard call to decide whether it should have the shading or not... meh, just something I thought I'd point out.
Anyway, Meta knight looks very fancy and that glowing crescent on his face looks SO COOL! There's something odd about him be hey, he's a ball with limbs. What can I say?
You definitely have the skill to do some badass things with this sort of thing. This, being a hit or miss first time thing. I say you did pretty well. It didn't hit the bullseye for me but it hit the target nonetheless. Keep it up!
If I were to nitpick, then I would say the balloons look like a different style of shading is used which is a tad bit distracting, and if you look closely, a little of the red balloon's color bleeds into the yellow's. It's also a bit unclear what Meta's sitting on (to me anyway..), and his feet could be a bit larger.
Overall, great picture, great concept, and Meta Knight looks sufficiently mysterious and badass even with the carnival outfit. ^-^
Just a note: this is my first formal critique, so I apologize if I'm a bit hard on you..
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